[Penguicon-Concom] Souvenir Book

[Ron Blanchett]

I have looked at this several times now and the lack of larger spaces
between the paragraphs that are in adjoining topics just doesn't look
right to me. To me it makes the book look crowded.

On 4/1/08, penguicon at mac.com <penguicon at mac.com> wrote:
> Pg 19
>
>  2nd colum
>
>
>  The young adult various would later become Pierce's first published
>  novel.
>
>
> should read:
>
>  The young adult version would eventually become Pierce's first
>  published novel.
>
>  (change various to version and later to eventually)
>
>  Also, on that page, the frame around the page number covers the f in
>  if in the
>  second to last paragraph.
>
>
>  On Apr 1, 2008, at 8:12 AM, Dan DeSloover wrote:
>  > For your proof-reading enjoyment, may I present the almost completed
>  > souvenir book.
>  >
>  > Download here:
>  > http://www.zifferent.net/p6/SouvenierBook1.pdf
>  >
>  > Please, respond with errata and corrections to me at
>  > zifferent at yahoo.com.
>  > Thank you
>  > ----
>  > Dan DeSloover
>  >
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