[Penguicon-Concom] Souvenir Book

[Keri]

Some more things I found (please note all page numbers given are the PDF 
page numbers, not the labeled page numbers):

On p3.  *Experts on and the
Singularity.*    That sentence makes no sense.  Something is missing.

on p6 under Masquerade, *Kendra Duan ewill* should be Kendra Duane will

on p14 in the EULA *volunteer, toward making Penguicon 5.0 better.*   
This is Penguicon 6.0

p15 in section 3, Area around the hotel, also includes Red Robin 5460 
Corporate Drive 248-265-4690


p19 under Tamora Pierce, bottom of first column *She went
on to studied psychology and social work    *should be "She went
on to study psychology and social work....."

p19 near top of 2nd column *The young
adult various would later become
Pierce's first published novel.    *The word "various" should be "version"

p21 2nd column, about a third of the way down   *In additional to
technical responsibilities,   *should be "In addition to
technical responsibilities,"

p27 2nd column undeer Greg Williams:  *His unfortunate and unappreciated
career in community theatre forced led
him into improv comedy, which he has
been inflicting on Fannish audiences in
various forms for over ten years.    *"forced led" should be "forced/led"

p34, bottom of page:  "thinghe" should be "thing he"

Also in Vernor Vinge's story there are a lot of underscores that don't 
seem to serve a purpose.  Should those be there?

Keri


Dan DeSloover wrote:
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